Comments : One More day

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Ooh. I really liked this. Idk what about it made me smile hard. Lol.
    Never stop writing. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Good song.

  • 16 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    But you should probably cite the writer, so you don't get in trouble. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    ;o // DAMN NICELY PENNED.. a beautiful write..

    keep writing..

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Reaper

    It took my breath. No joke. There is a reason for it or a person behind it. Tell me if you want. 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwwwwwwww. somethings are expressless. i think this is such a nice poem and there is no word to explain this nice work. you realy respect the words. i am happy that i read this poem. i will read more of your poem becoz i think thery would be all nice like this. i have added u in my favourites.
    and you deserve 5/5
    takecare

  • 16 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    I have a question who wrote the song?
    it was great though

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    Deliciously writen! It begs me to crave more, it was really out-standing. Awesome song there, I really enjoyed pretending to sing it well, whilst I was reading =] Keep it up missy!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Hello Laura,

    I miss our talks... hope you are well.

    Mr M.

  • Aw, this is so beautiful. It had a lot of emotion in this. Great choice of words. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>