Comments : While your gone

  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Really sweet and makes me sad :( Makes me miss my baby, lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Awwww, dear!!! This poem made me cry... it just brought up so many old emotions. It was deep, sad, full of love, I enjoyed reading every single line! It was a heart tugger, and I couldn't help but think of my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read this. Great job! Beautiful poem, keep it up darling! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Omg, beautiful! This poem was so sad, sweet, loving, and everything in between! I just fell in love with it! It brought tears to my eyes.. I can definitely relate to this piece. I couldn't stop thinking about my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read it. It brought up a lot of old emotions, which is great, it just means you got your point across and your poem touched my heart. Great job! Please keep writing love. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~