Comments : Piece of Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "You took away my chances
    Of finding someone true
    Because you let me believe
    That Mr. Right was you."

    Well done Charisma, you've poured out so much emotion in this poem, it almost sounds like your speaking from experience..
    Wonderful rhythm
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenie

    WOW!!! this is such a diffrent style and i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    u r so strong to finaly put an end to it!- dont let em get another piece of u!

    great talent!
    5/5

    Jenie

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    It felt like I looked in the mirror and saw this poem. It's like you knew my own tragic story. I loved it, one of my favorites! 5/5!