Comments : Unhappy Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is very emotional and quite sad. Yet written so well with such powerful conviction. Very nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    This is a very sad poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    The images used to explain your piece are clear and used at the right points. And again relate to me in many ways.