Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
i just fell in love with the frickin poem!
such good story. .writting, style, rhyming.. everything.. its going in my favorites
5/5!!!
<3ang

Awww it was so cute. But personally, I think it should go in the love poems or maybe the ones about life. It doesn't quite fit in with the funny poems.

The flow was good, although in a few places I think it could be rearranged so that it flows better in some spots. In a couple places, it seems a bit forced. The rhymes were ok. Nothing fantastic, but nothing utterly horrible.

As for the story line, it was cuute lol. First love at the age of 9 XD Woow. lmao. And I hope you find that one guy that makes your heart soar =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Awww!!!!
This was so cute, kinda sad in the begining but it turned out so nicely!!!! I hope you'll find your purfect guy soon!! this was an amazing poem!!! i loved it!!!keep it up ok!!!
5/5 =D

oh would you plz check out some of my poems and tell me what you think? thanx

~angel~

This poem is reall good i feel u

Awww, a real cute poem, loved it! ... as they say dont go searching for love, love will come searching for u =)
5/5

Awwwwwwwww
Such a cute poem ! =)
The Flow, the rhyme, was good =]
Well Written
and VERY cute !

Keep Smiling xx

Aww so cute i really like this poem keep the good work :P

Aww! that was an adorable poem! i loved it : ) keep it up girly!
<3 tabi

Love the positive ending! I think it's kind of cute how you tell the stages of your love....and it shows how we heal and move on. Nice piece!
Really lovin' your work!
Charisma*

OMG.i loove this song
i ve seriosuly love it
THis is a really good one

5/5

♥Mz.Raven

Its an excellent piece, well written.. 5/5

Nazeer