Tears run down
The poor girls face
Because she wishes
She could leave of this place

I think that is my favorite stanza but there is a mistake in it i think She could leave of this place I think it is supposed to be She could leave out of this place. but idk it jsut sounds a little better

I can really rely to this poem right now, cause I was already crying.. and now I could really picture myself in this poem... so nice work. =]
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Sooooo good luved it :)