Very good
Very good rhythm and rhyming.
I think it is very deep and good.

Great pome very mysterious and it shows lots of feelings. I love it keep up the good work.

If you have time plz chek out some of my pomes "Sakos Story" and " a poem to my cuzen"

Wow!! I love this. Beautiful pictures (well not nice but very descriptive) and so much emotion. I loved the ending. 5/5 all the way. GREAT job.

Lovely.

This one was very powerful and well done. You're really good at showing emotions through your poems. -claire