Comments : Creatura

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very, very dark.
    Great rhyming.
    Well done
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I don't understand why this poem is so low rated...
    It is greatly written with such dark atmosphere and amazing descriptions. Unique piece.
    My favorite part is:

    -Break open the prisons of hope and faith.
    Murder all you were, become the demon's wraith.
    Take up the mantle of the darkest cold.
    Lies of love and understanding always told.-

    Simply powerful!