So sad...but i loved it
all.....love is very painful.....
we both know that....

"I grab that blood stained blade.
The mistakes I made are on my mind.".....yup...

5/5
always

Laura

It was okay. I suppose you did use good imagery but in all honesty your rhyme scheme wasn't all that great. At first you had a decent thing going but then it just kind of faded and you changed what you were doing completely. I know poems don't have to rhyme, but if you're going to start out rhyming then don't just stop in the middle. I'm sorry if this was mean, but I'm just trying to help you improve.

Excellent poem. I loved it.
When you wrote:
I fell no pain
I think you meant
I feel no pain
??

--Trinity

Read my poems?

Wow!That was a very good poem.I could picture most of it in my head.I love it.It was so sad.5/5

<3Amber

I really liked this poem it was deep and had tons of emotion good work
_forever carly_

This is a great job here. 5/5 I don't get what you meant when you said your comment didn't mean much, though. It's your opinion and your entitled to it just like everyone else. And it does mean a lot.

Very interesting. You created great and haunting atmosphere. Imagery is excellent and you expressed emotions superbly. 5/5

Wow so expressive i loved it so much emotion filled into one poems very good love it 5/5 xx

I loved it. :]
5/5

So much emotion in so little time. It was a great poem, but it was a little depressing. Besides the fact it was sad, it was great. the imagery was awesome and the way you arranged the words was great. keep it up .:erika:.

Oh my god! I love it! Short and sweet...well...Sad, but still! You got the message across!

This was VERY powerful! There was so much emotion and it was so sad. The imagery was really well done, as was your choice of words!

Loved it. i feel the same way. a loved one of mine left me. i almost picked up the knife but my mom caught me. i hope you find someone who will never leave you

Very good job it gets the point across really well 4/5