Comments : Trapped in my tears

  • 15 years ago

    by sadeyes

    Very sad but the words flowed well together

  • 15 years ago

    by Evil One

    Very sad, but it flowed smoothly

  • 15 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    There's no one to help me Im trapped in this sad life
    There's no one who cares so I pull out a knife

    *wow yes i can relate it helps and mocks us 5/5*

  • 13 years ago

    by misa

    Great poem =) and very touching. I can feel what you were trying to portray. You have great work!

  • 13 years ago

    by misa

    Great poem =) and very touching. I can feel what you were trying to portray. You have great work!