Comments : I will live my life

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Will stand up
    and live my life
    This world is cold
    Dont believe what your told
    I will dare to do the things
    that no one ever thought i could
    No more fear
    No more hidding

    my fav lines

    a very well written poem
    keep it up dear

    your friend
    Rohan

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow great rhymes and excellent style. I like the word choice and you are really good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Awesome poem love!! I really like it. Only thing is, you misspelled hiding. It's only one D. hehe. Anway, love ya dear!! 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Way to be, you are so strong in more ways than one. I'm not sure I could be that strong.