Cindy a very sad yet powerful poem , very well penned write.
Hope you doing fine.

take care
chavii.

A sad and touching poem ,but so beautifully written.

Take care.

Deep.. very deep indeed.. n i think amazingly expressed .. felt it.

An awesome one. keep it up

~Wake~

Dear cindy

Life for me is at it's end
Ready to close my tired eyes
Drawing upon my final breath
No one left to say good-bye

what a sad stanza. it brought tears from my eyes. how much pain. and home much deep this is! what a nice and perfect piece of writing. always and forever; you will be my favourite writer. if you were young than i would fall in love with you. lol i also love you know as a good friend.
again good work.. may God protect you from sorrows

5/5

Very dark and depressing Cindy.....

Shadows of the darkened night
Gladly welcoming you in
Wishing for your deadly kiss
My only friend, the bitter end

^great ending....excellent verses as always

Excellent work cindy, you captured the thought of loneliness being worse than any kind of physical pain, and how helpless it can make us..great work

Now that i know the origin from where it came, i must admit that u potrayed all ur feelings very nicely but very dark/depressive too...all i can wish is....for you to come out of it soon.

all the best and take care

Very sad write cindy. i hope you feel better. love ben

Beautiful poem.
Very deep and sad.
Beautiful piece of writing.
Hope your all right.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Can see the pain,feel it.A beautiful descriptive write.May God bless you .Take care.

Very deep and sad but still a great poem
5/5

Beautiful expressive emotion penned you portrait here my friend, Every stanza so deep meaning inside, "Wishing for your deadly kiss"

My best wishes for you and yours, take care...Bert.

I luv your last stanza it just ties everything together so perfectly really well done cindy *hugs4U* xox sam