LOVED it! the flow was wonderful... and the emotions shined through!

great job! 5/5

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Wow this is sad, it shows a lot of emotion this is probibly one of my favorites of yours 5/5

This was a VERY GOOD POEM, i loved it
it had a great flow
and the rhyming again never seemed forced

and the ending was good to

"The papers stay crinkled,
Where my teardrops splashed.
The words clear and cut:
Our personalities clash."

favorite stanza ^^

5/5

Nicely done. The pitch was excitable and emotions raw and well expressed. Your descriptions were well versed; it brought about a poignant emotion and a slightly plaintive ambiance throughout. I truly enjoyed this piece, Gab.

Excellent 5/5, the flow and the word choice is great. I dont wanna go deep in to poetic competence and other components because the poem engeged me and I loved readind it. The rhetorical questions are really good.

Tc
Fsams

Great poem! The rhyme and flow here were flawless. Really wonderful read! 5/5 Keep it up! Can't wait to see more from you.

marcella

Aww so sad but very good the words connected and the emotion was strong great job!!
5/5

laura