Wow very nice poem i truly enjoyed it and i loved the way you described the angel 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

"She got kicked out of heaven,
She fell from above,"

This poem had a kind of "fallen angel" feel to it which I liked about it. I think everybody in life sometimes can see themselves as the fallen angel, when times are rough, but no one is perfect. A dark and emotive write

I really liked that. the whole fallen angel thing was great. good job!!! :-)