In a way i kinda connect with this poem, i like the way you wrote it. it makes me wonder who it is about.

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
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Nazeer

I love this poem
I can totally connect with it.
Theres alot of feeling in this poem.
Love it :)
5/5

~Mz.Raven

I really like this poem. It made me smile =] I like the meaning of it

Beautifully written with so many emotions. I don't like the repetition that you made in second stanza with "keeping me safe", but the rest of the poem is really great. My favorite stanza is the first one.
Keep up, 5/5

AMAZING

my favorite lines are

I shall always be there for you
Within your times of need
Watching over the one I love,
Forever shall I watch over you
As you have done for me.

keep wrieting.. i love them all..

Aww cute poem...flowed nicely and was well written...i also wrote a poem called my guardian angel(i havent posted it yet but probably will later today)....

this one of yours is really good...excellent job. 5/5

I don't like repetition in first and in second stanza but this poem is still great. You wrote it powerfully and it is very unique. You described emotions incredibly and you created excellent atmosphere. 5/5

This was really sweet, yet very cliche. But you made the reason why it's so cliche stand out. You made this poem very meaningful, yet the emotion was not all here. I could sense you had something else to say that you didn't write. The flow was awesome though, great job!

Excellent poem, your choice of words was great. You used very good imagery and I thought it really brought the poem to life. Great work again, and thanks for commenting on my poem.

Aww.. Thats so Adrorable!

This poem remind's me a little of myself, so I can connect with it in a way. The flow was a little choppy, but it was still a good read.I really enjoyed it.

Very touching.
Keep it up,
Elaine.

This was so sweet. I loved the wording and i loved the flow and structure.
well done
love Tara-Kay
x

I didn't like how you used the word safe twice in the second stanza but, overall this was a great piece. Great atmosphere, you created here and meaning as well. 5/5

marcella

Good poem
really sweet
5/5
(who gave you a 4?)