This is an amazing write! 5/5 this reminds me of my life cept i'm a girl haha well any who this was really good i loved it keep it up :]

*~*bee*~*

Hunny,

the fear in his eyes i dont see in you
the love and hope in you i feel it too
the world can end and the sky can fall
but by your side im here, through it all
the life you lead is similar to mine
so much alike, you let my light shine
the steps you take are at your own risk
yet your heart still beats like a skipping disk
the three words i dread mean so much to you
the three words u said, i mean it too.

dylan. i speak from the heart with every beat, your the apple of his eye. no matter how much you dont think its true. it is. people have a funny way of showing it but hunny its true, he loves you dearly i mean how couldnt you. the love, the hope, the ambition and the will that makes you get up everyday and live another day, i hope to be like you someday. the fear thats inside me i seem to forget when im with you, ... you make everyhing dissapear for a while. one thing is all it takes to make your sunshine go away. the cries of your heart that no one hears, are screaming at me to help you achive them. the past is the past so live for the future. in one single moment i see your soul. in one single moment i catch a glimps of my future in your eyes. hunny, live your life they way you want to and the way you learned how to, the "what ifs" dont ever happen, life has another way for you to discover new things.

rememeber that.

life's only what u make of it. so make it count.

Awwh, niice way of expression yourself i can so relate to it good job

5/5