Wow really good it has a bit of a twist because you expect the other girl to be the other girl the words went to pictures on my computer screen
keep it up
_forever carly_

This poem is very sad. I like the flow of it, and the emotions you put into it. I like the ending, the last stanza is my favorite.
5/5 from me

I think that your poem is amazing, yet so deep an sad. Great choice for a title, it definitely throws you off with a suprise ending. 5/5

Wow this is one of the best poems i have read! I loved it you have great talent. 5/5 from me!

Can't really say anything different than what you've already heard... brilliant 5 / 5 !

This is how I feel sometimes but I wish it would just go away. Cuz I have never caught the guy I love cheat. But I guess everyone has doubts