Very much emotion, great work

I really like htis poem it really shows ur emotions

Honestly speaking, I love the style of your writings, and there is a better outlook...

Nazeer

HI davE,

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

O......M.....G
I am inlove with this poem for many reasons lol.
It very cute and you show alot of emotion.
Lucky person to whoever has your love :)

5/5

~Mz.Raven

It holds so much emotions, but again, it is too typical for my taste. I like love poems with exquisite wording (like your last one) or with some metaphors. This is just my opinion... I mean, the poem is not bad, it's just not my taste, so I won't rate it.

I like this poem very much. You expressed emotions greatly and it is very interesting. I don't like the last two lines but rest of this poem is excellent.