You say you wanted honest comments. I liked it, and i thought it was good.
the emotion was noticeable but i think if you search somewhere inside your heart i think you could really get something awesome from what is already very good.
It flowed nicely, and was a good poem
love Tara-Kay
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Keep writing! Keep it up! You have the marks of a great poet!

Really great poem and I loved the flow. 5/5