Beautiful penned, writing well within beautiful emotions.....lovely yet so heartfelt... well done! You deserve dear..

Nazeer

Amazing choice of words could so with a little work on the strucher maybe spliting it up a bit if you do poems like this from now on well just an idea exceot for this it is very good.

I love the way you write your poems.
Amazing

~Mz.V

Very emotional. The last two lines are very effective ending for the poem. You could write it in stanzas, that would add great effect to the whole piece. 4/5 honestly (I don't want to offend you, it's just my opinion) this one is not as unique as your others, it has too typical topic.

I don't like this poem very much. Sorry this is just my opinion but you could use some metaphors and you also could create stronger atmosphere.