Comments : Just

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great poem, I like the way you have written it with a good word choice and a beautiful flow. 5/5 for the emotions :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    The opening and closing stanzas tug my heart completely: they ring a bell with me. Bittersweet.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Like that too

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I love how you ended every stanza.
    this poem is wonderful, and it was written by a wonderful writer.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey