Interesting....i like that on alot to

It flowed really nicely.
And it was definitly interesting.
I think you could expand on it a little more, maybe breach why she is killing herself on picture day. Just a suggestion.

I really liked it though.
Keep it up.
5/5 Elaine.

That was a very sad poem.
But it was also very good, I do agre with Crystal Gaze though, when she said "I think you could expand on it a little more, maybe breach why she is killing herself on picture day"
^^I agree with that statement.
But non the less. it was a good poem.
and nice writer.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey