Andrew
What a sad gut wrenching piece.

the only safe haven lays in rest
a feeling that imitates death
no feelings of pain of hurt
no memories of what i've endured

These lines really touched me. It's like sleeping the days away to get rid of time.
Excellent.
Thinking of you.
Take care Cindy

I loved this. I love the concept and just everything about it. Your work seems to flow endlessly. I really like the structure too. Just beautiful :)
5/5

Omg, i loved it. it was amazingly written. the way you expressed it, was amazing. 5/5