Comments : Feelings Within.

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Amazing! You are a great writer Amber.
    This one did have a lot of emotion in it.

    Blank paper, stares at me like an enemy.
    ^^ That line just stood out to me... Maybe it's because I get that way sometimes. I can't stand it when paper just stares at you and you can't write on it. :p

    Fantastic job!
    5.5
    Ciao<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Your flow was really awesome. At first I thought the poem rhymed, then I went back and read it again and was like no...these words just fit together well.
    Awesome work. I can feel the emotion in the poem and it was totally relatable.
    You rock :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    "Words, that stay in my mind"

    I know. I know how this feels. for me though, it's not because of anger exactly but they're still some words never expressed, words that stay in my mind. I know the feeling. Pretty well-explained Amberr!

    Marjan

  • 16 years ago

    by 1A kayla

    Omg! that was so awesome i loved it so much!! keep on writing!