This is ver sad very dark but i still love and i can relate there will always e a part of a person that no one will ever know about great job!!

5/5

laura

Sad but true. ~great poem~

A very sad poem but Im sure many can relate to it. It's a very well written like many of the other ones by you that I've read. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Nicole

I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

I love your writings. I could re-read them a million times. I hope you write more..

If your feeling what your writing I hope you cheer up little buddy.

If you ever need to talk you can add me on msn or email me.

jade_nicoletemple@hotmail.com

You should read my poem its called my heart is crashing.. i think you'd like it. =) i love this one and all of the others ive read of yours so far.