This poem actually reminds me of the song runaway love by mary j.blige, well, I guess they will be lacking love from a great man...some sort...nice poem...

Very well written, sometimes i got lost and didn't really know what was happening but the thought and dedication put behind it was emense, i loved it and i can empathise with what was happening, it really makes you think about why you have been put on the earth, some think they are here to fight and they will die for there country and family.

very well written>
thanks for my comment>
keep it up
xx

Very well written, sometimes i got lost and didn't really know what was happening but the thought and dedication put behind it was emense, i loved it and i can empathise with what was happening, it really makes you think about why you have been put on the earth, some think they are here to fight and they will die for there country and family.

very well written>
thanks for my comment>
keep it up
xx

Very well written, sometimes i got lost and didn't really know what was happening but the thought and dedication put behind it was emense, i loved it and i can empathise with what was happening, it really makes you think about why you have been put on the earth, some think they are here to fight and they will die for there country and family.

very well written>
thanks for my comment>
keep it up
xx

Sorry i must of clicked submit a few times
at least it looks good that u got a lot of comments
xx
sorry