Great poem.
The flow and rhyming are perfect.

" How delicate your kiss must beat
Its moment moistly magic
From Passion's sacred luscious place
Apart from all so tragic. "

My favourite stanza, just beautiful.
Beautiful written piece.
I love your work.
Take care

How beautiful i really like this poem its quite meaningful.

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Very sensual and romantic,my favorite kind ,I truly enjoyed this.

A lovely piece with magical words tied in together nicely xox lithium

Such a smashing success. :)

Beautiful poems yet well emotions penned you portrait here..... lovely yet so heartfelt.... Breathtaking!

Beautifully written. Excellent poem!

5/5 Ingrid

Great how you describe your emotions and feelings..really liked it.well done 5/5

Amazing poem...Great word choice...beautiful!
Def. 5/5!
-Amanda

A romatic write and sensual at the same time. Truly magical!