Comments : Third Degree

  • 12 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    The flow and rhyming are perfect.

    " How delicate your kiss must beat
    Its moment moistly magic
    From Passion's sacred luscious place
    Apart from all so tragic. "

    My favourite stanza, just beautiful.
    Beautiful written piece.
    I love your work.
    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Ixora

    How beautiful i really like this poem its quite meaningful.


  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    Very sensual and romantic,my favorite kind ,I truly enjoyed this.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lithium

    A lovely piece with magical words tied in together nicely xox lithium

  • 12 years ago

    by Debbie

    Such a smashing success. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful poems yet well emotions penned you portrait here..... lovely yet so heartfelt.... Breathtaking!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Beautifully written. Excellent poem!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    Great how you describe your emotions and feelings..really liked it.well done 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Amazing poem...Great word choice...beautiful!
    Def. 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    A romatic write and sensual at the same time. Truly magical!