Comments : First Chap

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I found that quite amusing. it was a funny piece. nice work. keep it up girl you got alot of talent. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    It never fails to bring a smile on my face, nevertheless. Nice one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This was really cute, i enjoyed reading it. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Omg.
    that was so funny.
    lol.
    I didn't laught out loud. But it put a smile on my face, and thats good enough for me.
    Keep writing,, your good.
    =]
    xoxo
    --Chelsey