Comments : A poem for today

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    In the last stanza first line I think you meant "were" instead of "where."

    I really like this poem. I like the last stanza the best. Writing something more than just words is a great thing, and how you said that all your emotions ran dry and now you cant write....thats so sad!

    keep it up!!

    ~Mo~

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow. i think i said wow on evry poem of yours that i commented. u deserve all the wows in tha world. <333

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautiful ending, you described emotions wonderfully. You used -word- and -words- too many times. Anyway great piece, third stanza is my favorite. It is really deep and emotional. It deserves 5/5