Comments : While you were sleeping

  • 16 years ago

    by Bree

    Hey that was a great poem-song. i can really relate as ive been used so many times. ever need to talk just p.m me

    xox

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Damn it .. sad but full of hope .. theres a new start.. ^^

    Im laughing, and smiling
    Not that Im free
    Even when you left
    You kept a part of me
    But Im taking it back
    And Im throwing you away
    Im not letting you break me again

    ..just loved these lines.. pretty relatable.. great work.. keep it up

    ~Wake~