Is this true? I'm not one to give advice, for reasons I'm not going into, but don't compare yourself to someone else your whole life, I don't know anything about you but I'm positive anyway that you are wonderful in yourself...

A great , great great write.. does make you think.. a very sad ,very realistic and an excellent poem. .. loved it..

Great Work.. nicely expressed

Keep it up

~Wake~

Damnit Shauna!
You ARE beautiful!

I mean, hell. Maybe not "classical", or something shitty and phony like that, but you are, hun. You really are.

And it doesn't take a god damn photographer's camera to figure it out.
So take those silly thoughts and shove 'em up somewhere the sun don't shine...[[haha, much...]]
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I love you.
Pretty poem.
I like it.
I don't like you thinking it.

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