Comments : A Girl Too Perfect For The World

  • 12 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Is this true? I'm not one to give advice, for reasons I'm not going into, but don't compare yourself to someone else your whole life, I don't know anything about you but I'm positive anyway that you are wonderful in yourself...

  • 12 years ago

    by Wake

    A great , great great write.. does make you think.. a very sad ,very realistic and an excellent poem. .. loved it..

    Great Work.. nicely expressed

    Keep it up

    ~Wake~

  • 12 years ago

    by Narphangu

    Damnit Shauna!
    You ARE beautiful!

    I mean, hell. Maybe not "classical", or something shitty and phony like that, but you are, hun. You really are.

    And it doesn't take a god damn photographer's camera to figure it out.
    So take those silly thoughts and shove 'em up somewhere the sun don't shine...[[haha, much...]]
    XP

    I love you.
    Pretty poem.
    I like it.
    I don't like you thinking it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Narphangu

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    ...Whoops.