Long love poem. Good. well described emotions. Putting names in poems takes a little away from the way a person reading it can get into it and feel it relatable, but the overall feeling of love cut short at summers/vacations end is something lots of people can probably relate to anyway, and including the name of the person you love makes it more personal and important to you, so who cares about other people =P this poems for you right? =)

its a very good poem, heartfelt, its great you found love/mr right. even if it was cut short, hopefuly temporarily though.

good write