I like this poem...it really is inspirational

Amazing.. simply amazing.. a damn good flow and a damn good write.. "..words dont break bones"
great work

keep it up

~Wake~

That's a nice poem but if you want some advice (don't take it the wrong way, that's an amazing poem) I would say to make it more interesting using better vocab and things coz I sort of found myself reading it but not paying full attention to what I was reading and ended up having to read it again.

~Amy