Its very good.
sad. but good.
I can relate.
And i Love you like hell! woot!
5/5
XOXO
-Chelsey

Well, I cannot say I relate to this one,
but it is very deep with emotions,
so I will give you that.
The flow was very well done.
Good work and keep it up.

This is a great dark piece you have real talent in conveying the real agony and pain in your life. And i think alot of people can relate to that.5/5 u rock!!

Fantastic job,this is a talent that should be spread all over the world,great imagery too.
keep it up!
take care
-Lisa

Well done! a beautiful piece from a talented writer, great job!

I love the imagery you use here! 5/5

Sad but great poem. can really feel the emotion. 5/5

I love it, its so real

Again this poem really touched me. Keep writing and stay safe.

Sam xx

I really like it =]

So sad yet so vividly sincere. Your misery or the misery of your subject is so bluntly depressing, great job.

Prince Charming,

Thank you for that

Sorry for your pain I've been there hell I'm there now...but I do like this poem its very emotional.Deep!!! keep writing!...love always...YF!

Sorry for your pain I've been there hell I'm there now...but I do like this poem its very emotional.Deep!!! keep writing!...love always...YF!

I really liked this one...I've always admired those who can write AND rhyme. 5/5.

5/5 excellent poem well done keep up the great writing you are truly a gifted poet
take care