Comments : I Believe In You

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    //* Excellent poem. Such a wonderful love portayed here.

    "You're an angel from heaven.
    And my actual dream come true.
    I never believed in miracles.
    But babi gurl I believe in you."
    ^^^^
    That's my favourite stanza. It's just so beautiful and sweet.

    Take care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow very beautifully written...i exspecially liked the way you ended it...very sweet!! keep up the good work..your doing great!! 5/5:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Wow..i dig the last two lines...very strong connection when all faith has been given up and theres at least one thing to believe in, great work again!