Very dark imagery. You explain what you want the viewer to be seeing very precisely and clearly. A very dark image of a nightmare. Liked it. You know your words very well. You dont seem to take long to get your words out the words felt like they just rolled out of your mind. 5/5 Kia xoxo

Your use of words has painted a picture with memries i have ignored. This poem sent chills down my spine. 5/5.
love willow

Wow. If I could get across my feelings for this poem in words I could. The imagery is among the best I have ever read, EVER. Diction, rhythm, and rhyme were all near flawless.

amazing job. keep it up.

p.s. yeah I wrote it like 15 minutes before putting it up hah.