Thats sad...ben =(

--Lindsey

That is so sad....sweet and sad :( hang in there

Wow this is really good especially for a first poem cant wait till you write more 5/5

laura

Short and simple : ) yet really good. Sad as well.

Short and painfull.. thats wt i wd call it :P

brilliant work.. truly heartfelt
damn good for your first attempt.. i sopose ^^
keep it up

looking forward for more of your work

~Wake~

Dooode Awesome first poem.

Aww rlly short but rlly cute and i love it a lot super AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW