Yes, didnt you just do a wonderful job, this was absolutely awesome, i loved it
love Tara-Kay
xxxx

I loved writing this you Cindy..... you know exactly how to make a collab sound as if one person were writing it!...well in this case....this poem had two points of veiws but you'd never guess two people wrote it...you're a great poet Cindy and it was an honor writing with!
Love Always,
Chelsey

Just as wonderful as a beautiful mirrored image....

A beautiful view of motherhood and childhood, its great how you two managed to put these two views together and let readers understand how it works lol lovely poem girls xox sam

Loved this one ,and I think every mother will relate to this one.I don't have a daughter myself but it kinda got me thinking about the kinda realtionship I have with my own mother.Through my teenage years I would shrug off everything she said and tell her to stop nagging but now I am adult and I look back I think maybe I should have listened to my mum more.Very well done with this one.

Beautiful poem.
The emotions from a mother to her child are beautiful described.
Flow, rhyming and word choice are great.
A pleasure to read.
Take care

Beautifully done! The empathic emotion drawn out by the characters endears the poem to me. I guess I'll look forward to understanding my mother's point of view in due time. She usually pictured me as the 8-year-old Debbie she had left behind seven years ago, which then results to an occasional misunderstanding and such-to's. *shrugs* I know not her thoughts and feelings at the moment, but what I do know is that... she loves me. I'm certain of it.

I'm truly delighted with this piece -- it's so touching! Thanks for sharing, ladies! {;)

A very thoughtful poem, very true with today scenario.Every parents anxiety when kids enter in there teens and want freedom.Enjoyes reading it.

Take care
chavii.

"Hating seeing her heart break
I'm not ready to let her go
Much to young to be tied down
Needs to take things much more slow"

I thought these lines were beautiful! 5/5

Wow, this is beautiful! I love the two authors, the way it switches back and forth, and this is something I can relate to, being my mom's only girl...This is a great poem! I love it.