Wow, this poem is so powerful! It is very deep and just... amazing!
My favorite lines are:
-Our paths are already drawn
Our lives we've yet to live
Should we follow the map?
Or shall we explore?-

The choice of words in the poem is excellent.
Well done, 5/5 from me.

This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...

ThaT iS sucH aN excellenT poeM, i lovE youR worK!!

- luzaN

Its a well written poem with lots of courge... 5.5

Nazeer

YouR stylE oF writinG iS aN enjoyablE topiC. aN excellenT piecE oF worK thaT attracteD mY sinceritY verY mucH...

thiS iS luzaN froM NZ

OH itS a lovelY writinG...i prefeR mucH... thankS lol.....

luzaN

Love it! It is beautiful!!! Really it is beautiful...

Nazeer