Amazing...so beautiful too 5/5

--Lindsey

Aaawweee. thats such a sweet poem. it gave me like a picture in my head of this boy who has a friend who doesnt see how much he loves her and even tho shes blind to his love he still protects her and cares for her threw all of his pain. great peom! keep up the good work. thanks for the comment. i'd really like it if youd comment and rate on more of my poems. ur thoughts are greatly appriciated! :D thanks

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hun! that was so great!!! if you dont know alread, ur a great writer! u need to post more! ill be ur #1 fan! lol
wtg hun!
never stop! u got something going for you =]

Good write. It was quite sad though. Sorry that this girl doesn't realize that she is loved. I started to tear up a little as I read. Very sad, by GREAT!
5/5
*Brittney

Wow, this is a really good poem, sorry to hear if this is a true one... girls dont realize who really care about us.. and sorry to hear that you have to deal with it. amazing wording... keep up the good work =)
5/5
-Sami

O_______o DOODE SOO MANY GIRLS...

wait I'm a girl .______.

I love it I can totally relate.

5/5

Aww super cute ben god i love the poems you do so cute oh and thanks again for helping me with mine

This is so sweet and heartfelt, fantastic write!

Brooke<3