Wow clostrophobia sucks that was deep 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Heya....some honest constructive criticism?
I liked it....but try not to use cliched rhymes like tear, fear, etc....there are a lot of cliched lines in your poem.....use something original, and it will really add color and flavor to your poetry :)

just my two cents :)

This was pretty good, it was simple, yet very relatable, but just to tell you, murmurs is one word. it was very strong though, and the flow was good too.
4/5
gabriella