Comments : For my sister

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was a very sweet poem, being a bigger sister and all, it does mean a lot to know that someone looks up to you. I think you wrote this wonderfully.
    I thought the part that reached out to me was

    This is for you.
    I don't know how to thank you.
    So I am writing this.
    Yes I know its just a poem.

    But maybe it says more than you think.

    You did a fantastic job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Love this poem

    alot of people realize what they take for granted when its almost taken away

    alot of times it is to realize how lucky you are
    great job

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    That is so sweet

    Your sister is so lucky to have someone like you =) A beautiful tribute

    5/5
    *Gem*