Oh that was great expression of life and the imagery seems very powerful even the creativity.. u had really express ur thougths here very well... i think its also very dedicated to everyone.. keep it up 5/5

"Bright lights hanging in the air,
Please tell me how to fly.
I want that feeling of freedom,
I'm not afraid to die"

^^ AMAZING beginnging.

I absolutely loved this poem as well.
Why have I never came across your poetry? ohmy, I wish I would have ages ago.

The emotion is spetacular, the flow and word choice is flawless, you've just outdone yourself here, darling.

Amazing job.
5.5