WOW.. that was AMAZING>. simply , superbly , amazingly AMAZING. @_@

i loved it !

a painfully penned piece .. awe-somely expressed .. i like the the way it made a movie in my mind.. great work ..

Keep that chin up ^.~

~Wake~

I can say that I have wanted to do the same. I've cried myself to sleep and a lot more. Sad a guy doing this. I really like this a lot. Sad when so many people view a wonderful poem and don't vote or comment. Also I saw one error, you put 'god' when I think you ment good. Thought I'd let you know. ;)

"i wasn't god enough
and i couldn't be the daughter you wanted me to be"

This is such a beautiful poem i love it man it's so deep and sincere I knwo how you feel...

A very good job on writing this, it was missing a few letters here and there but the emotions were strong and perfect ^_^ Great job, 5/5
~*Rhea*~

I love the way you wrote this..gr8 way to tell a sad story..keep it up!