WOW! this was one of the best poems I have ever read! your really good it was deep. thanx for the comment not really alot of people comment on my poems.

This is a really good piece, the imagery is fantastic and the emotive langage really captured my imagination.
'You could call it depression, but sadness is my obsession' i can really relate to this line in particular
this is another example of your pure talent!!!
ooh i also like the repetition too
5/5 :D

This gave me shivvers up my shine.
i really liked, it touched me.
and yeah i needa fix them all up,
its just i never get the time too,
and most of the time they are just
thoughts that are running through my head,
and i just leave them as it is.
=] anways nice poem
xx