Comments : Final Message

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I really love this poem. It is very touching and you wrote it greatly.
    -goodbye I will not say
    for one day again we shall meet
    we'll throw another big party
    that will rock the gods off their feet"-
    ^This stanza is simply outstanding. You created incredible atmosphere in this stanza!
    Excellent job! It really deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Angie, what a beautiful poems you penned here, so heartfelt yet beautiful expressed emotions...this stanza remain me long time ago...

    a hug and kiss to each one
    a final message I would leave
    "do not cry when I am gone
    at peace I will be.

    I've seen this message Before she gone.....