Very nice poem...nicely arranged 5/5

I don't know why you thought anyone would be harsh!
I think it was beautifully written!
It's one of the few genuinely good love poems I've seen around here.

Tis a great poem
very nicely written
if this was written a while ago
then i couldnt tell
it was magnificent good job

Keenan

Tormy torm, been awhile since youve written, but this is very good, i give it a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!