I love this...this is beautifully written and original in concept.
As always, flow and imagery is great and I loved the ending, I thought it made a very powerful effect on the whole piece.

Sick in an EXCELLENT way! great job, flows well, .. it was good.

Good one. I like the flow and the story of it.

I loved this. Definately one of my favorites from you. I`ve always found it cute how you capitalize the title in the lines of your poems lmao, I dunno if I`ve ever said that to you before, but now I did lol. Anyways, I don`t really know what else to say. No words can ever amount up to your talent.

5.5
heartchuu. <3