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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    Great poem. I love how it just illustrates this dark picture of loneliness (for me anyhow) and in all its loneliness its just so beautiful. I loved this stanza:

    I call but no one answerers,
    I scream but no one replies,
    I am alone,
    I don't exist in your lives

    Very well written, keep it up, I gave it a 5/5. Also I'd LOVE it if you'd read some of my new poems and comment/RATE them. Thanks you SOO much!!
    Rachel <3

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Wow wow wow, I can very much relate to this poem...I feel like that all the time..great write!

    Brooke<3