Don't worry this isnt no hate thingy. i actually really really liked your poem. im not the greatest poem writer person thingy either.. lol. but i really liked your poem. alot of ppl could relate to it..................................................................................including me:)

I can relate alot
this is very good i enjoyed reading it

5/5
laura

This was short and sweet. it was simple yet you captured so much emotion that some people spend their whole lives trying to describe, and that others arent brave enough to feel. this was excellent. the wording was beautiful and the flow was strong.

--TheGothicAlbino